god bless B
god bless B
Woah actually cool for a stick man fight. Movements are really well done!
edit: appreciate the reply nearly 5 years later
Thanks, I appreciate that.
Exactly how I remembered it.
I'm not alone!
The animation isn't half bad, but the voice quality needs some work.
The kid at the pools voice is supposed to be kinda, sarcastic, or dumb, just to play on the fact that you wouldn't actually forget that you can't swim... thanks for the review though! :D
I saw some previous reviews and your replies and thought I'd give some criticisms.
It may be "Satire" but its not funny. Mostly because the jokes have been used many times before this, and delivered in a funnier way. Also use real voices as others have said (Pls dont call me a motherfucker you'll hurt my feelings), mostly because a real voice can deliver lines and jokes better than a text to speech program can.
Another thing is the way you're presenting the "satire". I don't think I've ever laughed at a GoAnimate video. Satire is supposed to be funny. See where I'm going with this? I doesn't hurt to try out Adobe's 30-day free flash trial or ToonBoom's free trial. You could at least try OpenToonz to learn the 12 principles of animation and stuff like that. Anything but GoAnimate though.
Anyways I hope you appreciate this review, if you keep at it you could become a great animator, its not too hard if you like it and are passionate about it. It just takes time.
Like also stated before, I am switching over to Blender, Adobe Animate, SFM, etc. Thank-you for your detailed feedback. By the way, mother fucker, if I call you mother fucker it's a compliment.
Pretty funny! Sorta reminds me of the Captain Tardigrade animation that was featured a little while ago.
Keep it up dude its awesome!
RIP Caillou's hair
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